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Arif Saputra: Juni 2020

Minggu, 21 Juni 2020

Writing Caption

Traveling to the Old City of Jakarta is one of the many trips for me. If you visit the Old City, surely what you see is the Ontel (ancient bicycle), and the Fatahillah Museum or its human statue.

The thing I like the most in Kota Tua is the Batavia Stadhuis Building (City Hall of the VOC Governor's office) which is now a historical museum in Jakarta.

 

Many things to visit in Kota Tua and interesting things in Kota Tua such as Sunda Kelapa Harbor, Fatahillah Museum, Fine Art and Ceramic Museum, Puppet Museum, Bank Indonesia and Bank Mandiri Museums, and many more.

 

So, I never feel bored when going to Kota Tua, because Kota Tua always a fun and interesting place in Jakarta.

 


 

Jakarta Old Town

 

Jakarta Old Town aka Old Batavia, or locally referred to as 'Kota Tua Jakarta', was the downtown area of the capital long ago, bearing silent witness to the occupation of the Dutch East India Company. A walk through town will immerse you in streetscapes lined with buildings boasting architectural features of a bygone era and in some corners around town you’ll find what is considered among the best samples of Dutch colonial architecture in the region.

 

Consistent with the nostalgic aura of the old town, most of the museums in Jakarta are found within Kota Tua. These include the Jakarta History Museum, otherwise known as the Fatahillah Museum, after the admiral and national hero who gave Jakarta its primordial name, ‘Jayakarta’, literally ‘town of victory’. Other museums include the Indonesian Maritime Museum, two bank museums namely Bank Mandiri and Bank Indonesia, the Wayang or Puppet Museum, and the Museum of Sculpture and Ceramic Arts.

 

An interesting fact is that most of these museums are former colonial buildings and restored by retaining much of their original architectural features. The ceramic art museum, for example, was a Dutch courthouse, and Fatahillah was once the town hall of Batavia. The national archive building, or Gedung Arsip Nasional, which can also be found here, was the former residence of Dutch East Indies governor-general Reynier de Klerck.

 

The location of Kota Tua is in the Kota area, West Jakarta. The way to get to Kota Tua is very easy with the Transjakarta bus heading to the City department. The City Department can go through Harmony and then to the City (Rp. 3,500).

 

While most of the buildings are in a somewhat derelict state despite some functioning as museums, continuous restoration efforts have been proposed, with the latest agenda of pushing the old town spanning 130Ha to be included in UNESCO’s world heritage list. Entrance fees to most museums start from a mere IDR 2,000 per person and are generally open from 09:00 to 15:00.

 

 Writing Caption - Journalism

 

Name   : Arif Chrisna Darma Saputra

Class    : 6A2

NIM    : 1788203057

Minggu, 14 Juni 2020

Writing Headline

Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director

 

Reuters

Paris, France   /   Sun, June 14, 2020   /   02:58 pm

Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director

Uruguay's forward Edinson Cavani attends a training session on July 5, 2018 at the Sports Centre Borsky, in Nizhny Novgorod on the eve of their Russia 2018 World Cup quarter final football match against France. (Martin Bernetti / AFP) (AFP/Martin Bernetti)

 

Paris St Germain's record goalscorer Edinson Cavani and captain Thiago Silva will leave the club after the conclusion of the Champions League campaign, the Ligue 1 side's sporting director has said.

Both players' contracts are due to expire in June and Leonardo told Le Journal du Dimanche that they would not be handed extensions.

Cavani, who joined PSG from Napoli in 2013, is the club's all-time top scorer with 200 goals in all competitions and has made over 300 appearances.

"It was a difficult decision to make, they are players who made their mark on the club's history," Leonardo said.

"We had to make a decision based on logic."

Both players will be involved in the Champions League campaign, which is expected to be concluded in August.

PSG qualified for the quarter-finals after eliminating Borussia Dortmund in the last 16.

After more than three months off during the COVID-19 crisis, the team will resume training on June 22, with Neymar expected to be on the ground after returning from Brazil on Saturday.

Leonardo said he expected the Brazil forward to be at the club next season.

"Nothing tells us otherwise," said Leonardo when asked if Neymar and France striker Kylian Mbappe would still be there next season.

"They still have two years on their contracts and we're more thinking about the future with them. We want to go forward."

PSG were crowned champions on April 30 when the league brought the season to an end as part of the country's efforts to contain the novel coronavirus.

ANALYSIS


1. Headlines should emphasize, summarize and help sell the stories’ contents.

Answer            : Yes, the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director has fulfilled the requirements and the rules because this headline has emphasized, summarized and helped selling the stories' content. In the second line, Paris St Germain's record goalscorer Edinson Cavani and captain Thiago Silva will leave the club after the conclusion of the Champions League campaign shows the second line also has emphasized, summarized and helped selling the stories' content as well as all people can know why Cavani and Silva leave from PSG in the news article.

2. There should be no opinion stated in a headline, with the exception of headlines for editorials and columns.

Answer            : Yes, the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director has fulfilled the requirements and the rules because there is no opinion stated in this headline.

3. Readers generally scan headlines very quickly to see if there is anything that they want to read about, so the most newsworthy information must be featured. The headline will be read by more people than the story will.

Answer            : Yes, the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director has fulfilled the requirements and the rules because this headline can be read by more people. And this headline is the most newsworthy information for all readers, especially for sport lovers.

4. The headline is the number 1 entry point into the story.

Answer            : Yes, the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director has fulfilled the requirements and the rules because this headline is the number 1 entry point into the story.

5. The headline should not give information that is not given in the story.

Answer            : Yes, because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director does not give information that is not given in the story.

6. The headline should inform the reader through a simple declarative sentence: subject, verb, direct object.

Answer            : No, because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director does not use the direct object. Because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director only use subject and verb.

7. The best headlines are in active voice and use action verbs rather than “being verbs”.

Answer            : Yes, because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director using the active voice and action verbs.

8. To reflect past action, the headline should be written in present tense.

Answer            : Yes, because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director written in the present tense.

9. To show future or possible action, the headline should be written with the infinitive form of the verb: to + verb.

Answer            : Yes, because the headline about the Cavani, Silva to leave, says PSG sporting director written with the infinitive form of the verb: to + verb.

 

REVIEW

Paris St Germain's record goalscorer Edinson Cavani and captain Thiago Silva will leave the club after the conclusion of the Champions League campaign. Both players' contracts are due to expire in June and they would not be handed extensions. Cavani, who joined PSG from Napoli in 2013, is the club's all-time top scorer with 200 goals in all competitions and has made over 300 appearances. PSG were crowned champions on April 30 when the league brought the season to an end as part of the country's efforts to contain the novel coronavirus.

 

Name   : Arif Chrisna Darma Saputra

Class    : 6A2

NIM    : 1788203057